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dan May 1st, 2012 • Report this
love the story,keep on writing story's like that and ill be on here evry day
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Immi R-S April 16th, 2012 • Report this
I have attempted writing short fantasy stories, but in comparison to this, mine seem incredibly meagre. Jonathan Stroud is one of the amazing, deserving writers ever!
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Matthew Taylor December 28th, 2011 • Report this
Brilliant writing, as always. I could easily imagine this takes place in Bartimaeus' world.
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Laura-Claire December 12th, 2011 • Report this
Stroud is always excellent, this was no exception.
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Raghu Reddy November 17th, 2011 • Report this
I love Stoud's writings... amazing that he can get one involved in such a short story also. Thanks Mr. Stroud.
Sorry, the rating structure is confusing, the first time I though the topmost the better but its different.
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Raghu Reddy November 17th, 2011 • Report this
I love Stoud's writings... amazing that he can get one involved in such a short story also. Thanks Mr. Stroud.
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Andrea V. November 15th, 2011 • Report this
I love how this story tells just like a good old fairytale. It's creepy all right, but SO classic. It's also a little sad how both characters fill their apparent hunger with greed. No good guys here; just one particularly dastardly predator. ("I've eaten recently." :D)
I'm not going to lie - what with the clear-cut writing, the awesome desert-y dustiness of the storytelling and whatnot, I was absolutely positive that the kid was Bartimaeus. I can dream!
Great work, Mr. Stroud!
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Kristine November 7th, 2011 • Report this
Brilliant, I really loved this story. Stroud is an amazing author.
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Candy Gourlay October 16th, 2011 • Report this
omg ... shudder! i had my heart in my throat!
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Maria October 7th, 2011 • Report this
AMAZING! Stroud is a genius, and this story is just one more example that proves it.
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mary stewart October 6th, 2011 • Report this
Gave me chills. Told like an old Greek fable; fluid, succinct, and poignant.